Summer Fun

In Writing, we were learning to use a hook. We had to use juicy verbs and different sentence starters.

I found it easy to use juicy verbs.

I found it tricky to think about the ideas.

Next time I would try and think faster.

It was a dangerous day at Browns beach. My family travelled in different ways, by cars, quad bikes, and motorbikes.

I saw tons of burnt old logs that had been washed up and dumped on the sand from the heavy waves. The sun was making the waves sparkle like diamonds. I could see fish swimming through the waves.

There were tyre tracks everywhere shaped like donuts. The hot sand was tickling my feet. It felt very hot like the desert. Heatwaves were taking the coolness out of my body.